Criterion A: 4
- The author offers a very detailed literary analysis of the chosen scene including the characteristics of the character he plays as well as emotions, tone and the atmosphere exits in the scene with supporting by direct quotes from the text. However, he also mentions a little bit too much about his partner's character.
Criterion B: 4
- The author does not give enough information for his own performance (only in the last paragraph), but instead the whole essay mostly focus on the literary analysis.
Criterion C: 3
- The author's use of language is not that organized and adequate especially at the beginning of the essay, many words are not effective enough and could be deleted.
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